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Post by dragon14 on Mar 10, 2006 10:15:46 GMT -5
Author's Note: This takes place in the Monster World depicted in the Doma arc. I will not be adding any actual people from YGO GX, only monsters. The main characters are the Black Magcian and the Black Magcian Girl. The antagonist is well, you'll figure it out. Let's get started shall we?
Prolouge: An Ill Omen
He slept in the ruins of the Spellcaster Academy and the dream came to him again. It had proven to be a recurring dream, yet he had no idea why this particular series of events played out nigt after night. He was in a tomb, on a walkway, surrounded by blades suspended by pendulums. Behind him was a man, he thought looked familiar, a high priest wearing a gold ring around his neck. Facing him however was a young, scarred man, with long white hair, and in front of him was a terrifying beast. The battle played out as it always did with the young man falling into the abyss, but now there was a new vision: three immensly powerful beasts, one red, one yellow, one blue. He had never seen them but he knew the names they were the beasts of legend: Ra, Osiris, Obelisk. Yet, before his eyes they were ripped apart by almost mirror images of themselves. He watched in horror as these new monsters laid waste to the land, and yet he saw a familliar face, the young man wiith the white hair, he appeared to be extending his hand to the beasts. He thought it looked as if the man was controlling the beasts, was this an omen of things to come?
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Post by dragon14 on Mar 10, 2006 10:16:11 GMT -5
comments?
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Post by Darkness on Mar 10, 2006 10:17:22 GMT -5
This is a great start. You should make the chapter a little longer.
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Post by dragon14 on Mar 10, 2006 10:18:23 GMT -5
just a prolouge it gets better w/ chapter 1
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Post by Darkness on Mar 10, 2006 10:20:16 GMT -5
Oh. Well keep up post the next chapter soon.
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Post by dragon14 on Mar 10, 2006 10:21:57 GMT -5
I will I'm still planning every thing out. I have the plot worked out I just honestly have no idea how long this'll actually be. Anything in particular u want worked in?
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Post by Darkness on Mar 10, 2006 10:23:41 GMT -5
No, but I'll tell you later if its ok with you?
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Post by dragon14 on Mar 10, 2006 10:24:50 GMT -5
sure I guess I'll do chapter 1 now
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